Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
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Hi My name is Nicky and I like the poem and I like the words you have wrote. Next time maybe include some of the starts and their names.
You might also want to resize your presentation so it fits in the blog.
Hi my name is Kate I like your poem but the background is a bit much, if you maybe make the background a solid colour and resize the words It would look great. Thanks Kate
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
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ReplyDeleteHi My name is Nicky and I like the poem and I like the words you have wrote. Next time maybe include some of the starts and their names.
ReplyDeleteYou might also want to resize your presentation so it fits in the blog.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Kate
ReplyDeleteI like your poem but the background is a bit much, if you maybe make the background a solid colour and resize the words It would look great.
Thanks Kate